{"id":680,"date":"2026-10-26T04:58:45","date_gmt":"2026-10-26T04:58:45","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/richardwinser.com\/blog\/?p=680"},"modified":"2026-10-26T04:58:45","modified_gmt":"2026-10-26T04:58:45","slug":"what-do-you-do-when-the-copywriting-greats-disagree","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/richardwinser.com\/blog\/what-do-you-do-when-the-copywriting-greats-disagree\/","title":{"rendered":"What Do You Do When the Copywriting Greats Disagree?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><em>\u201cDo not use more than 17 words in a headline. Why? Based on my tests, I\u2019ve never been able to make a headline work that is longer than this!\u201d<\/em> &#8211;<strong>Ted Nicholas<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><em>&#8220;Pretty much all the rules about headlines are nonsense. There\u2019s a rule that says a headline should never be longer than X number of words. And some of my most successful headlines are more god-awful long than they should be, and I also had ones that made a lot of money that are one-word headlines. It\u2019s not how long they are; it\u2019s what they say.\u201d<\/em> &#8211;<strong>Dan S. Kennedy<\/strong><\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">We&#8217;re constantly told to study the greats.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">Okay, but what happens when the greats disagree about something as fundamental as headline length?<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">Ted Nicholas draws a firm line at 17 words. Dan Kennedy says he&#8217;s made money with headlines ranging from a single word to ridiculously long sentences.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">Which one should you believe?<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">The disagreement becomes more interesting when you examine how each man reached his conclusion.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">Nicholas noticed that headlines longer than 17 words failed in his tests. He converted that observation into a rule.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">Kennedy saw successful headlines of wildly different lengths. He concluded that what a headline communicates matters more than its word count.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">Both men learned from experience. But experience always comes with boundaries: particular audiences, offers, media, and circumstances.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">What kinds of products was Nicholas selling? Where did his headlines appear? Did longer headlines actually lose because of their length, or because they tried to say too much?<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">And when Kennedy&#8217;s long headlines succeeded, did the extra words supply crucial information, sharpen curiosity, or make a promise more believable?<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">The answers could reveal when a short headline has an advantage and when a longer one earns its space.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">This is a better way to study experts than collecting their rules like commandments.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">\ud835\udde7\ud835\uddff\ud835\uddf2\ud835\uddee\ud835\ude01 \ud835\uddf2\ud835\uddee\ud835\uddf0\ud835\uddf5 \ud835\uddff\ud835\ude02\ud835\uddf9\ud835\uddf2 \ud835\uddee\ud835\ude00 \ud835\uddee \ud835\uddfa\ud835\uddee\ud835\uddfd \ud835\uddf1\ud835\uddff\ud835\uddee\ud835\ude04\ud835\uddfb \ud835\uddf3\ud835\uddff\ud835\uddfc\ud835\uddfa \ud835\uddf9\ud835\uddf6\ud835\uddfa\ud835\uddf6\ud835\ude01\ud835\uddf2\ud835\uddf1 \ud835\uddfc\ud835\uddef\ud835\ude00\ud835\uddf2\ud835\uddff\ud835\ude03\ud835\uddee\ud835\ude01\ud835\uddf6\ud835\uddfc\ud835\uddfb\ud835\ude00. Find the territory where it works. Look for the boundary where it stops working.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">RW<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">.<\/p>\n<p class=\"xdj266r x14z9mp xat24cr x1lziwak x16tdsg8\">.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\u201cDo not use more than 17 words in a headline. Why? Based on my tests, I\u2019ve never been able to make a headline work that is longer than this!\u201d &#8211;Ted Nicholas &#8220;Pretty much all the rules about headlines are nonsense. 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